How to add essential context to a story without info dumping, slowing the pace, or interrupting the narrative.

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Authors have a tall order set before them with every story they create: Paint a full, believable picture of characters, worlds, situations—vivid and real enough to draw readers in and keep us invested—without distracting dumps of exposition.

Consider the infinite number of strings that you as puppetmaster must not only operate but create to bring your stories to life, and that herculean task begins to seem all but impossible.

The result of well-meaning authors trying to adequately flesh out their stories is often momentum-stalling swaths of context, backstory, and explanation that can pull readers out of the story.

But there’s a solution, my friends, and it’s hiding in plain sight…literally: You have to be sneaky about it.

I think of this type of story development as stealth context: essential information about your characters, stakes, plot, setting, etc., that’s hidden amid the metaphorical bushes like a cagey White House press secretary dodging questions.

This type of context seamlessly and incrementally fills in what readers need to know—as they need to know it—without bogging down your story in clunky “tell.” I often liken it to the countless tiny brushstrokes of pointillist artists that create depth, dimension, and nuance in a painting.

Like impressionist art, these tiny ubiquitous strokes gradually make up the entire picture; in fact it’s the most common type of context vivid, effective stories employ.

Stealth context is powerful because it offers a great deal of information below the radar: Readers don’t realize how much information they’re receiving because it’s laced in seamlessly as part of the action and momentum.

Rather than swabbing in broad-brushed splats of color, stealth context uses subtler context cues: details that indicate context to readers implicitly. These are some of the fine-tipped brushes you can use to create stealth context:

Tools for creating context

• Verbiage: dialogue, word choice, vocabulary, frame of reference, figurative language and imagery, etc.
• Organic exposition/description: weaving in subtle information about what readers need to know without interrupting a story’s forward movement: e.g., restating, defining, offering examples, etc.
• Contextual puzzle pieces, clues: descriptors, details, contrast and comparison, etc.
• Action, reaction, interaction: showing characters acting and interacting within the situation/world of the story and how they are affected by it, allowing readers to infer deeper meaning
• Character inner life: characters’ thoughts, emotions, subtext, behavior, nonverbals, etc.

You know your tools; now let’s look at how to use them.

How to seamlessly add context

Let’s look at some of these techniques in action. How can you pave in context throughout the story to bring it more fully to life without momentum-stopping info dumps?

Zahra got to work late, her boss waiting impatiently on her when she arrived at her desk.

Not horrible—we know what’s happening to who, but not much beyond that, and it’s straight-up flat “tell.” Let’s add in a few context cues to start to fill in more of the picture and bring it to life:

The elevator had never seemed to take so long, as if it were trying to sabotage her. By the time Zahra hustled past Frida at reception and beelined for her desk, hair straggling around her face from her hastily tied ponytail to try to evince some semblance of professionalism, William was already standing next to it. Her stomach dropped.

Her boss ostentatiously pulled his arm toward his face, pretending to study his fake Patek Philippe watch. “Late,” he said, unable to hide a smug smile. “Again.”

From the action and reaction of Zahra’s frustrated impatience about the elevator, readers can infer that she’s late for something. The detail of the reception desk tells us she works at an office in this building, and the sloppy ponytail that she wants to make a decent impression but is a bit scattered (at the moment or habitually? we don’t know yet—but we don’t need to). Her sinking stomach (reaction) tells us that it’s bad news that her boss is waiting for her.

The next paragraph starts with a subtle explanation of who William is, woven smoothly into the prose rather than clunkily spelled out: her boss. It also begins to indicate his character—the action of his showy time check and the fake designer watch detail suggest he’s a bit of a douche—and his dialogue confirms she’s late to work and it’s happened before. The description of his smug smile indicates that he’s happy about it.

We don’t know all the specifics about the job, her position, how often she’s been late, why her boss seems to relish the fact he’s caught her—but we don’t need to yet; the author builds what context readers need as we need it, offering pieces of the puzzle amid the smooth forward movement of the scene.

You could paint an even fuller picture with other specific details, like the bustling sidewalk on Zahra’s way into the building where she has to dodge traffic and pedestrians all in a hurry to get to their high-rise offices, indicating a big-city setting; or the elevator being so ancient it still has the controls from where the operator used to stand in it, painting a picture of a run-down old building; or that she passes empty desks on her way to her office that remind her of the fragility of her job, suggesting that she might be worried about being fired amid mass layoffs if she’s caught being late again.

Want to set it in another time? Add fluid details that evoke the period:

She glanced at the steno pad she’d left on her desk, grateful he couldn’t read shorthand.  

Is this story set in a different world? Context cues like details and specific verbiage begin to evoke a sense of the story’s setting:

The two suns lit the green sky so brightly it hurt her eyes, and she adjusted her visj to filter out the most harmful of its rays before she reached the safety of the megastructure.

Want to layer in more brushstrokes of character and background? Add specific context about that:

She cringed seeing his nose wrinkle at the rich scents of the ghormeh sabzi Madar had insisted she take for lunch. William liked the office the way he liked everything, judging by his daily uniform of navy suit, white shirt, and bland tie and the little Stepford family in the photo on his desk: clinically sterile and neutral.

We might infer from the details of her lunch and the names that Zahra may be Persian. Her boss’s reaction and her inner life continue to give readers context on his character and her attitude toward him, and lets us begin to infer personality traits for both characters through Zahra’s irreverent, funny description of his bland conformity.

Want to layer in more context about the plot?

She rummaged in her bag and pulled out her laptop. “I worked all weekend and I’ve got the revised report ready.”

“Surely you don’t want extra credit for having to work extra time due to your own shortcomings the first time around,” he said, one brow arched.

She wanted to smear that supercilious look right off his face, but that was a luxury she couldn’t afford. It had taken months just to find this job.

The dialogue and subtext convey context about what’s been going on at work—her boss clearly demanded she quickly redo a report he found lacking, and the action of her hastening to show him that indicates her eagerness to please or to keep her job and her difficulty in getting it. This not only builds in more context, but furthers the plot, raises stakes, and keeps building character—magical multitasking.

Context can help build out essential backstory too, without yanking readers out of the current scene or stalling momentum:

She wouldn’t have been late if Madar hadn’t fallen again, which always meant an extra twenty minutes at least to not only get her somewhere comfortable and safe and tend her imaginary wounds, but to listen to all the reasons that if Zahra were more successful and had been a doctor like Madar wanted, she could afford to put her mother somewhere safer and nicer than Zahra’s run-down apartment.

Readers can infer from these context cues—which are directly relevant to her current situation, thus not interrupting the current scene to clumsily insert backstory—that Zahra lives with her mom, that her mom appears critical and demanding, that she may be frail or not in the best health, and that Zahra’s financial situation isn’t especially strong.

Readers can also start to form a picture of their relationship and personalities: Her mom seems nagging and difficult, and Zahra docile or conflict-avoidant—but this context may also begin to suggest that Zahra has backbone in resisting her mother’s plans for her life, or perhaps that she failed out of the medical track. We don’t know yet, and we don’t need to know; you paint in only as many brushstrokes as we need to orient to and invest in what’s happening now, and then gradually keep filling in the picture as the story progresses.

Learn more: My online course “Seamlessly Weaving in Backstory without Stalling Out Your Story” shows how to lace in essential backstory and context while keeping your story moving forward

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Start analyzing books you read in this granular way: Read a passage or page, and then list everything you understand about the character, their situation, the plot, and the setting. Then go back and identify where and how the author laced every single piece of information into the scene without drawing attention and pulling you out of it or stalling momentum.

Learn more: My “How to Train Your Editor Brain” course teaches how to analyze other people’s stories to improve your own

When you pave in stealth context like this you not only keep readers immersed in the action and propulsively moving through the story, but you involve and engage them directly because we’re taking the clues you offer and piecing the puzzle together little by little for ourselves. That makes the reader an active, engaged participant, rather than simply a passive recipient of dry expositional tell.

Continue reading:

• “How Specifics Make Your Story Universal”
• “Writing Dialogue with Meaning”
• “How to Write Deeper Characters: The Secret Beneath the Surface”
• “How to Weave in Backstory without Stalling Out Your Story”
• “Analyzing What Makes Story Work (or Not)”
• “Story Transitions and Connective Tissue: Techniques for Creating Seamless Narrative Flow”
• Check out the How to Analyze Like an Editor videos on my YouTube channel

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