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Two commonly misinterpreted canons of story can make rampantly using flashbacks in your story deceptively seductive: “Backstory is the story” and “Show, don’t tell.” Flashback seems to fit the bill perfectly, doesn’t it? Dramatizing your main characters’ past in a “real-time” scene from it surely handily addresses both issues.
But used unskillfully, flashbacks risk yanking readers right out of your story, confusing or overwhelming them with backstory, and stopping momentum in its tracks.
The truth—as it often is—isn’t quite so black-and-white: Backstory is key to a story, yes, but it’s not the story—the main story is the story, and losing sight of that by leaning too heavily on flashback is one of the prime reasons they get a bad rap.
And as I frequently tout, the tired story saw of “show, don’t tell” should more accurately reflect what your kindergarten teacher already knew perfectly well: show and tell—both have important roles to play in story, and knowing which to use when is a big part of keeping your readers engaged.
I’m a fan of the flashback—well executed and woven smoothly into a story, flashbacks can bring your characters more fully to life; deepen reader investment in and understanding of them and of their arcs; and make the story more vivid and visceral.
So how do you access the power and potential of this often-maligned narrative device, while avoiding its pitfalls?
The trick lies in asking yourself four key questions before plunging in.
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1. What key information or action does the flashback contain?
Flashbacks shouldn’t be used just to flesh out or paint a pretty picture of a character’s past. Making them feel intrinsic and organic to a story means ensuring they are used intentionally and effectively. What specific, relevant info do they convey about your characters or story?
For example, let’s say you have a scene with a couple in the office of a marriage counselor they’ve gone to for help with their struggling relationship. Readers need a sense of this couple’s history and their current dynamics for the scene to have the impact it needs to—character and story cannot exist in a vacuum, and stakes come from character and reader investment in what stands to be gained or lost. Perhaps one specific occasion from their past (or recent present) could illustrate these key points strongly and vividly.
For instance, one character recalling a positive event like the sparks when they first met, or their magical first date, or the joyful birth of their first child might show readers that they once were deeply in love or that there’s still great love between them.
Or recalling an early “red flag” of contention between them, or a betrayal, or a recent terrible fight could indicate the major cracks in their foundation.
If you are considering showing a flashback, first determine whether it contains something specific, directly relevant, and germane to a story and scene.
2. How does the flashback essentially illuminate the character or story?
Even as you glance backward with flashback, the story itself should always be moving forward. Well-used flashback accomplishes this by serving to spark a realization, reaction, or action in the protagonist in the present-day story, moving your character further along their arc.
Going back to our floundering couple in counseling, what effect does recalling the event contained in the flashback have on your character in the context of the current scene and the main story?
For instance, does remembering the fervor with which her now-husband once courted her make her decide there’s something worth fighting for, no matter how deep the current breach between them might be? Or does it perhaps make her realize that he hasn’t looked at her like that in years, and the spark has long since gone out, stripping her of hope?
You’re the storyteller—you’ll decide what best serves the story you’re telling—but making sure the flashback fulfills some essential, momentum-furthering function in the main story is key to harnessing the power of flashbacks.
3. What makes flashback the strongest way to present this information?
Flashback is just one of three major types of backstory, along with context and memory, the latter two of which are usually by far the predominant tools for building seamless backstory.
But flashback is seasoning, not the stew. Because of their risk of stalling the story out flashbacks should be used very judiciously, and only where they are the most effective, impactful way to convey the necessary information.
In our troubled-couple example, it’s essential that readers have a strong sense of these characters and their relationship so that we feel invested in the outcome of this counseling-session scene (which you’ve hopefully itself already vetted to ensure it’s also essential to furthering the main story).
You may be able to do that effectively by using context (which is backstory woven into the present-moment story, a form of “tell”) or memory (backstory recalled by a character while planted in the present-moment story, usually “tell” with a “show” component).
But depending on what information or action the flashback comprises, it may carry more emotional heft and resonance to briefly pull readers away from the current scene and let us live the flashback memory with the characters directly.
It depends in part on the purpose and pace of the main scene: If it’s a high-stakes, high-drama, fast-paced scene, then a flashback may unnecessarily stall that momentum and detract from the main scene/story. If it’s a more internal scene, or one without a major story development that a flashback might risk pulling focus or impact from, then using one may complement and help add resonance to the current scene.
4. What makes it essential to show the flashback now?
Ask yourself whether the info in the flashback is necessary or maximally effective at this moment in the story. To paraphrase the Watergate hearings, it depends on what the reader needs to know and when they need to know it.
For instance, in our running example, if readers already have a good sense of this couple’s dynamic, history, and each one’s attitude toward counseling, then pausing the action to dip back into a scene from early in their marriage illustrating that may not serve the story best.
If there is no subsequent turning-point moment as a result of the flashback, no illumination of the main story that is essential for this scene to be most effective or carry deep resonance, or to move the story forward in some essential way, then using a flashback here may not be the best use of this powerful but potentially disruptive tool.
Alternatively, if the flashback presents crucial, specific information that is essential for the unspooling of the main story, and in particular this scene, then this could be the exact right place for it.
General Flashback Guidelines
A few other tips to keep in mind for smooth flashbacks:
- If you do decide flashback serves the story best in a particular place in your story, help ensure it enhances the story and is woven in seamlessly by connecting it to something specific in the present-moment scene to transition into and out of it smoothly. Don’t default to cheesy “segue” lines like, “She remembered it as if it were yesterday” or “The memory played in his head like a movie.”
- Use concrete, specific aspects of the memory to build the flashback scene organically within the main story and bring it fully to life. Generalized or vague flashbacks risk stalling your story for no strong reason—if there’s not some key, specific incident contained within the flashback, then consider whether the backstory you want to convey would instead be more effective in context or memory.
- And I beg you, please don’t set flashbacks in italics, or in a different font. It’s like posting a “FLASHBACK AHEAD!” sign that pulls readers out of the story; wearies readers’ eyes; and most publishing houses will change them to regular font anyway (predominant house style).
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Over to you, authors–where do you stand on the dreaded flashback, friend or foe? Do you use them in your stories, and if so how do you decide whether and where they serve the story best?
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(In a fun meta-flashback, this post originally appeared in the Writers in the Storm blog.)
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I have a manuscript that has two timelines. One is the protagonist of the second when she’s a child, up to 17. The second timeline is same person at age 30, when the main story takes place. I also have multiple povs.
I don’t know if you would consider the child’s timeline as flashbacks. They are a character’s past, although, for reasons, I call the time Not Now. Besides alternating POVS, the story alternates timelines. There is an arc of the child’s story that can be followed, hopefully as much as the adult’s, but the two threads also relate to each other, hopefully enriching the story.
Your questions to ask all are useful. I’m trying not to make each Not Now be the why of the previous Now chapter and these type of questions are good. (Sorry if this is confusing.)
I know the guides always say don’t pull the reader out of the story, especially with flashbacks. But as a reader, sometimes it’s time for a slightly different taste, which is what I’m trying to do with alternating povs and a second timeline. My goal is that it’s fun, like a puzzle, letting the reader be engaged, working a bit to follow, and being rewarded when they do. Wish me luck, haha.
Thanks for the excellent questions.
Flashbacks are often mixed up with multiple timelines, but they’re usually not the same thing. Flashbacks are generally scenes interspersed amid the main storyline; separate storylines are full stories in and of themselves that complement or affect the main story. That means the latter should have fully developed story arcs, and often bear equal or nearly equal weight as the main story. Although these chapters may “flash back” to an earlier time, they’re not actually flashbacks as far as the role they play in the story.
With successful multiple storylines–and flashbacks too–the goal is to not pull the reader out of the story as a whole. Many time flashbacks feel intrusive because they do stop the story’s forward momentum, which often pulls the reader out of the story world and is when they may disengage and put the story down. Pulling them out of one timeline (or storyline or POV) to move to another usually has the opposite effect if both are well developed and move the story forward–as soon as story momentum stalls, you start to lose your reader.
Not sure if that helps, but I’m glad the questions in the article do! Thanks for the comment, Ada.
I nodded in agreement through this entire, wonderful post.
I’ve encountered a select few flashbacks that were so effectively utilized that they kicked me in the chest, cracked a few ribs, and stole my air. The vast majority? Not so much. In the worst are those, and I seem to be encountering them with greater frequency, the author and/or character TELLS us what happened in the past—and then shares a chapter SHOWING the moment.
My Kovenlore Chronicles series, which is seven novels, all drafted, the first making its debut this November, has exactly ONE flashback. It’s at the series’ midpoint and explains loose threads that existed in the preceding novels, and alters the protagonist’s arc going forward.
That sums up my attitude. A flashback, by virtue of interrupting the story, should do some heavy lifting. I don’t mean the infamous shower scene in Dallas in the 1980s, but instead Luke’s bad day in The Empire Strikes Back.
Cast the past in a new light. Shade the path forward in a different hue. Throw in some foreshadowing, and so on. Make the reader want to return to the main plot, not because the story is dragging, but because they can’t wait to read what happens next.
In my one kinda flashback, a character needing vital information that was blocked from her memory in childhood (this is fantasy), endures a Spell of Remembering—and has a reaction to it. In and out of consciousness while others try to save her, she learns what was blocked, has some other nagging questions answered, and has revelations she didn’t want.
I write a large number of “backstory tales” that are actual stories. They’re also for me, and how I learn about characters. I then weave them into a novel as needed.
Flashbacks often get such a bad reputation because of what you say, Christina–they kind of hang a lantern on themselves, feel like a detour and stall out forward momentum, and can pull readers out of the story. And yes, flashback is usually most effective as scene, not summary. (The latter is not really a flashback anyway…more like retrospective exposition.) I agree with you that they need to do heavy lifting–they carry enough risks of losing readers that they’re usually best used very sparingly, and judiciously. Thanks for your insights!
I use flashback infrequently, trying to implement the advice from four of your articles on the subject. I find it challenging to weave flashback into the current story and to smoothly transition back so the reader isn’t jarred or confused. Thank you for these guiding questions!
Glad they’re helpful, Lee!